Martin, Shaken And Stirred

[Stratman]

Martin, Shaken And Stirred

A script written by myself, and revised by Darren AKA Beer Necessity.

To access the script, scroll to the bottom of the page, type in the security code, then click on submit. You will then see a green tab with a ticker, it will ask you to wait approximately 30 seconds. Once the countdown ends, the green tab will read ''Download File Now.''

We welcome criticism.

[Mr Blue Sky]

I think it's great!

[Stratman]

''A riveting, eye-opening masterpiece.'' The New York Times

''They deserve their own show. Masterfully written.'' The Sunday Times

Those are just some of the reviews we paid handsomely for.

[Mr Blue Sky]

''A riveting, eye-opening masterpiece.'' The New York Times

''They deserve their own show. Masterfully written.'' The Sunday Times

Those are just some of the reviews we paid handsomely for.

I think they were a tad harsh!

[Nervosa]

Really good stuff lads!

My only problems are the 'penis' joke and 'son of a bitch' line at the start; I just didn't think it felt very Frasier. And the same with "The spy who shagged me" bit.

But I was grinning most of the way through it! The Nixon line, the lightbulb changing phobia line, and the spider in the bath line made me laugh the most! Also, about Marty's shooting story - wow!

[Mr Blue Sky]

Thanks for the feedback, Nervosa!

[Wezzo]

I agree with Nervosa. Aside from a couple of bits I thought were marginally too crude for Frasier, it was hilarious, and the "self-righteous brothers", and light bulb lines made me laugh out loud. The dialogue and characterisation were really spot on - I can envisage the dramatic moments really working, and the story was a great idea. Even the title cards were good! Congratulations on a great script.

[CatNamedRudy]

Whatever file sharer you're using simply does not like to work with my computer.

[Stratman]

Thanks for the feedback, guys. It's interesting that people think some of humour was too crude, BN did call me on that, but my depraved mind refused to see it as anything by tasteful fare. I had no idea the lightbulb story would be such a hit either.

[CatNamedRudy]

Finally got it to download to where I could read it!

Pretty good. I'll ditto what most of the others said.

I don't necessarily think the idea of the subplot is crude as was the dialogue. It could work though. After all, cruder things have happened on Frasier (Knees off the Keys Please!)

I also laughed out loud at the self righteous brothers line! SO MARTIN!

[Stratman]

Just thought I'd mention that I ripped the lightbulb story straight from my own life, I can certainly change a light bulb, the dangers just scare the hell out of me. And I wish I came up with the self-righteous brothers line.

Thanks for the feedback, CNR.

[welshben23]

I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.

[Stratman]

I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.

I think the complaint is that said lines don't quite suit the show. I have no doubt that Ronee would say the lines, I'm not really sure how I feel about the complaint though.

[Mr Blue Sky]

Thanks for the feedback, Wezzo, CNR, Ben.

[CatNamedRudy]

I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.

I don't deny that Ronee would say those things. And in fact, that part didn't even really strike me as being crude or OOC. It was more the dialogue between Niles and Roz that I found a bit too crude. It just struck me as not quite right.

I love the primary storyline though.

[Moon-Crane]

Just downloaded it guys, so i'll read through asap.