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Martin, Shaken And Stirred

Postby Stratman » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:46 am

Martin, Shaken And Stirred

A script written by myself, and revised by Darren AKA Beer Necessity.

To access the script, scroll to the bottom of the page, type in the security code, then click on submit. You will then see a green tab with a ticker, it will ask you to wait approximately 30 seconds. Once the countdown ends, the green tab will read ''Download File Now.''

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Postby Mr Blue Sky » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:52 am

I think it's great! :lol:
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Postby Stratman » Sun Mar 25, 2007 5:58 am

''A riveting, eye-opening masterpiece.'' The New York Times

''They deserve their own show. Masterfully written.'' The Sunday Times

Those are just some of the reviews we paid handsomely for.
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Postby Mr Blue Sky » Sun Mar 25, 2007 6:15 am

Stratman wrote:''A riveting, eye-opening masterpiece.'' The New York Times

''They deserve their own show. Masterfully written.'' The Sunday Times

Those are just some of the reviews we paid handsomely for.


I think they were a tad harsh! :lol:
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Postby Nervosa » Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:37 pm

Really good stuff lads!

My only problems are the 'penis' joke and 'son of a bitch' line at the start; I just didn't think it felt very Frasier. And the same with "The spy who shagged me" bit.

But I was grinning most of the way through it! The Nixon line, the lightbulb changing phobia line, and the spider in the bath line made me laugh the most! Also, about Marty's shooting story - wow!
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Postby Mr Blue Sky » Sun Mar 25, 2007 1:39 pm

Thanks for the feedback, Nervosa!
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Postby Wezzo » Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:41 pm

I agree with Nervosa. Aside from a couple of bits I thought were marginally too crude for Frasier, it was hilarious, and the "self-righteous brothers", and light bulb lines made me laugh out loud. The dialogue and characterisation were really spot on - I can envisage the dramatic moments really working, and the story was a great idea. Even the title cards were good! Congratulations on a great script.
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Postby CatNamedRudy » Sun Mar 25, 2007 7:44 pm

Whatever file sharer you're using simply does not like to work with my computer. :cry:
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Postby Stratman » Mon Mar 26, 2007 12:38 am

Thanks for the feedback, guys. It's interesting that people think some of humour was too crude, BN did call me on that, but my depraved mind refused to see it as anything by tasteful fare. I had no idea the lightbulb story would be such a hit either. :D
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Postby CatNamedRudy » Mon Mar 26, 2007 1:19 am

Finally got it to download to where I could read it!

Pretty good. I'll ditto what most of the others said.

I don't necessarily think the idea of the subplot is crude as was the dialogue. It could work though. After all, cruder things have happened on Frasier (Knees off the Keys Please!)

I also laughed out loud at the self righteous brothers line! SO MARTIN!
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Postby Stratman » Mon Mar 26, 2007 5:17 am

Just thought I'd mention that I ripped the lightbulb story straight from my own life, I can certainly change a light bulb, the dangers just scare the hell out of me. And I wish I came up with the self-righteous brothers line.

Thanks for the feedback, CNR.
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Postby welshben23 » Mon Mar 26, 2007 10:11 am

I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.
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Postby Stratman » Mon Mar 26, 2007 11:05 am

welshben23 wrote:I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.


I think the complaint is that said lines don't quite suit the show. I have no doubt that Ronee would say the lines, I'm not really sure how I feel about the complaint though.
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Postby Mr Blue Sky » Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:40 pm

Thanks for the feedback, Wezzo, CNR, Ben.
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Postby CatNamedRudy » Tue Mar 27, 2007 10:47 pm

welshben23 wrote:I think its great, I disagree with the criticism of the penis and "son of a bitch" parts of the dialogue. Imho Ronee would say things like that.


I don't deny that Ronee would say those things. And in fact, that part didn't even really strike me as being crude or OOC. It was more the dialogue between Niles and Roz that I found a bit too crude. It just struck me as not quite right.

I love the primary storyline though.
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Postby Moon-Crane » Wed Mar 28, 2007 12:20 pm

Just downloaded it guys, so i'll read through asap.
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